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Thanks for your contributions to James Higginson (artist and filmmaker). Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it has too many problems of language or grammar and it is promotional and reads like an advertisement. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. GPL93 (talk) 14:58, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your feedback!
"Problems of language and grammar" surprises me — what do you mean by that? The language style, or language/grammar mistakes?
I read the article and the Wiki help pages again, trying to figure out where you might consider it to be promotional. Is it about links added (e.g. production company)? Should the exhibition list be deleted, is it too much detail? Is it too long?
Would you mind taking a look at the draft once I've changed it, before publication? I really want to deliver relevant content to Wikipedia, thus any advice would be much appreciated. Thanks a lot in advance! Denyso (talk) 15:55, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi Diannaa,
thanks for checking new articles and standing in for copyright protection — really appreciate that!
In this case, for "Shuddhi (film, 2023)", it was completely unintentional to use material that was potentially used by other sources as well. I am sorry for that.
Could you please publish it as draft again so that I can rework it?
Thanks a lot! Denyso (talk) 14:07, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I have moved it to draft space and removed the copyvio parts. Draft:Shuddhi (film, 2023)Diannaa (talk) 12:44, 18 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks a lot! I have done some first minor corrections to it, and I'll add some more info about the movie in the next days, just need to check that all info is correct and precise. Denyso (talk) 17:39, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]